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Remembering the Remembered by ~Balsaflysbetter:iconBalsaflysbetter:



Remembering what was remembered
~Matt

The motor spins slow and the four blade prop spins even slower. Only pushing the air fast enough to make a small tear on the surface of the lake. Standing across from the people you hate, sitting across the continuing couple.

Others bringing up events that you would rather not think about. Also to good if your mind checks out. Remembering things that make people, not only you, confused. After the sun has rose, the sun must set. A short, sad, smiling scuffle.

Remembering events that haven’t happened, and never will. The human mind needs a security to stay alive. The history needs hope to keep recording. De-ja-vu twice in two hours. Remembering what has been remember, before never done.   America was nice, but I like home better.

Stars fall from the sky itself, people say that your wishes will become true. Only if your wish is to be killed by a meteor, then there is a false hope. The magic is there if you play your cards right. Gazing up for answers, The silhouetted figure writes the tear stained letter.
©2007-2009 ~Balsaflysbetter
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:iconbalsaflysbetter:
oops a couple typos!!! sorry~
:iconbansheerika:
Lol i like this. Its really nice. My favorite line is the "The magic is there if you play your cards right."

Excuse me, i'm such a looser lol, i'm not much of a critic so you'll have to learn to deal with the normal," omg i love it so much" babble you'll get from me like kate did.

May i draw a picture from that line? Too bad i'm going to anyways.

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:iconbansheerika:
Lol Yeay ^^

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:iconbansheerika:
HI again, i re-read this.. and i must say, those last lines are still sooo pretty. hehe.

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